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Haiku by: Lori A. Zybala
air free as the night
layers of stars shine brightly
each one knows it’s place
L.Z. 2025 ©
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air free as the night
layers of stars shine brightly
each one knows it’s place
L.Z. 2025 ©
Great haiku, Lori. I like the middle line visual imagery of:
" layers of stars shine brightly"
So good description of looking out at the night sky and seeing those starts in layers of depth.
Love it. So tight with all the right images.